Pretty sure twins are rare no matter what race you are. The height and ‘OH SHE’S SO RARE’ bullshit pisses me off. Someone tell me how I feel about the rest of this.
On one hand, I hate it because she’s entirely generic - scantily-clad(and unashamed, too, girlfriend) elf who’s cheeky and drinks like a sailor and throws her cusses around like nobody’s business, is petite and graceful yet deadly and muscular. She’s pretty boring when you get down to it.
But her writing isn’t all that bad, and I feel like she almost handles being a generic snowball(I’m using that term to mean cum passed from one person’s mouth to another, implying that this basic concept is just sloppy seconds, for those of you not on my 5AM wavelength here) fairly well, so I’m going to give this a 4.9 out of 10. Not quite good enough to be right in the middle, but the fact that her writing confused my feelings saved her a little bit.
Or maybe I’m just overtired.